So i was visiting another blog i read, and the author, darkaura posted a song, which he wrote himself. It was pretty awesome. So i figured i'd post a song as well. I was originally gonna post a song i wrote on my facebook page, but instead i ended up writing a brand new one.
"The Corner Of Truth And Lies"
"The Corner Of Truth And Lies"
And i Was So Afraid of
what this world was doing
I stood in the shadows of
my own regret
And my tears were so cold
i couldn't remember the name
of the world and all its games
they were so.......
So it's really come to this
the world will spin
and i am standing on
the corner of truth and lies
and i'm waiting the day
you realize
i wasn't gonna stay,but
maybe i'll wait a day
it's still the rain that keeps me
at bay.
I look to the stars
and all i see, is the fool i used to be
It's so cold in this old house
the walls are talking and
i can't take it, just one more pill
will make it clear to me
So it's down to one last kiss
and your close you eyes
the worlds still spinning
and i believe that this
is the corner of truth and lies
The world is gone,my life is lost
and sanity has failed
but when i close my eyes
i see the place
where i will always prevail
Thats all for today kids
J-Moose
2 comments:
good good but ur song seems more like a poem. IF you want i could sit down with u and work out some of it's kinks lol u have some awkward fraising and some diction issues:D but i liked it though.
YO find me tomorrow and bring a copy of your song were gonna work on it and then go to setimies and come up with something iight
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